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Expressing Love

Mushtaq Ul Haq Ahmad Sikander Posted On January 9, 2021
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In the moonlight, when none is in sight

I would like you to, open up and be light

Walking down the green meadow and endless forests

I want me to be the solace of your eyes

I am well aware that the world around you has been cruel

I intend to be the shoulder for you to share your burden

The sadness and agony you have been shielding even from yourself

I hope you can express them to me

I can’t be permanent weather in your life

But like a wind that blows gently and shakes a flower

I am optimistic that accompanying the flower is fragrance

That is bound to influence anyone who is around

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Mushtaq Ul Haq Ahmad Sikander

Sikander is Writer-Activist based in Srinagar, Kashmir

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41 Comments

Muneer
January 9, 2021 at 10:37 pm
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Best lines.. Full of wisdome.


    Mashkoor Mushtaq
    January 10, 2021 at 10:04 pm
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    Really inspiring..!!
    Full of love , emotions, feelings etc..
    And above all optimism is fully equipped.!!

Maria
January 9, 2021 at 10:42 pm
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Admirable job Mushtaq, you are really good at this. Keep going 👍


    Aks muraad
    January 10, 2021 at 9:09 am
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    The poem is full of wisdom and beauty!
    More power to ur pen

    Adil Langoo
    January 10, 2021 at 11:01 am
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    Amazing expression of love. Keep it coming.

    Rashif Azmi
    January 10, 2021 at 12:05 pm
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    Masterpiece
    Beautifully crafted

    shazia bukhari
    January 10, 2021 at 8:29 pm
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    nce lines

    Mehreen
    January 11, 2021 at 1:47 pm
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    These lines touched my Heart.
    Nothing remain permanent.
    Pain is temporary, Troubles, Sadness and so as Love.

    Heena Iqbal
    January 18, 2021 at 9:54 pm
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    It’s so beautiful and pure…

Umer
January 9, 2021 at 10:45 pm
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Exquisite. Superbly penned.


    Aeiman
    January 9, 2021 at 11:34 pm
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    Work of art.

Arz
January 9, 2021 at 10:45 pm
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beautifully potrayed the state if being broken and hope of standing again in words….

“I am optimistic that accompanying the flower is fragrance

That is bound to influence anyone who is around”


Shabir Ahmad Mir
January 9, 2021 at 10:46 pm
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Outstanding lines, depictng optimism . Would like to see more such lines spreading love and affection.


    Aymun
    January 10, 2021 at 1:01 pm
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    Heart touching lines .
    Indeed u r a g8 writer

    Sabahat
    January 10, 2021 at 8:34 pm
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    Beautiful….every word holds a story….an emotion

Aliya khan
January 9, 2021 at 10:47 pm
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Soul touching poem…May you shine and rise…


    Badar
    January 9, 2021 at 10:51 pm
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    Wonderful

Dr ashraf kashmiri
January 9, 2021 at 10:50 pm
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I would like you to, open up and be light

Wah – Your poetry is so powerful, you put into words exactly what I struggle to convey to my beloved .

Thanks a lot Alexandra.


    Shaifta
    January 10, 2021 at 7:51 am
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    The verses embrace every emotion – grief, sadness and fear. They are full of promise, assurance and unconditional love.
    Such powerful lines written in simple words.
    May your pen enrich more and more bhaya.

Aafiya
January 9, 2021 at 10:56 pm
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Beautifully played with words

Keep Writing
Keep sharing

Sir😊👍


    Alexander Y
    January 9, 2021 at 11:07 pm
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    Wonderfully written. Your writings never disappoint. More power to your pen.

    Bilal Ahmad Rather
    January 9, 2021 at 11:08 pm
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    A very good effort. The poem is full of love, care, respect and above all full of emotions and feelings. The way you present or express the feelings in this poem speaks itself the intensity of your eloquence and rhetoric. The best thing which i like in this poem is that ” Ican’t be permanent weather in your life

    But like a wind that blows gently and shakes a flower”. Perhaps this would be the centre theme of the poem.
    Dear sikandar sir, I wish you all the best for your future endeavors. 💐

    Shoaib
    January 9, 2021 at 11:30 pm
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    Very interesting

Urba Ramzan
January 9, 2021 at 10:58 pm
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Stunning!!!
So beautiful lines.


Wafai
January 9, 2021 at 11:05 pm
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Great works


R H A Sikander
January 9, 2021 at 11:14 pm
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Amazing! Blessed be your pen!


Neelofar
January 9, 2021 at 11:38 pm
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Masha allah…. Touch wood
May Allah bless you


Dr Sonika Gupta
January 10, 2021 at 12:48 am
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Beautiful written poem..

God bless you always..

Keep writing

Keep sharing


    Agha Faisal Ali
    January 12, 2021 at 1:15 pm
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    Beautiful. Way to go Mushtaq.

Saba
January 10, 2021 at 12:56 am
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Nicely written !

Love truly is an unfathomable feeling you hold for someone !!

Rise and Shine !!!


    Iftikhar Misgar
    January 10, 2021 at 9:28 am
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    Wonderful expression of love and care, beautiful poem. Keep your pen run to soothe our mind with your writing. God bless

Shahin Ansaru
January 10, 2021 at 11:26 am
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So lovely


Shahin Ansari
January 10, 2021 at 11:27 am
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Beautiful..


Shahin Ansari
January 10, 2021 at 11:28 am
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So lovely


Dr. Talat. Majid
January 10, 2021 at 12:09 pm
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There is only happiness in this life, to love and be loved.


Kausar jan
January 10, 2021 at 12:46 pm
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Ma sha Allah…. Very nice lines


Maroof
January 10, 2021 at 1:34 pm
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Words and form not up to the passion in the poem. Praying for your growth as a poet. Few verses border on prosaic. Two verses make it worth the time.


Safa
January 10, 2021 at 2:34 pm
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Encouraging bro


saimah shah
January 10, 2021 at 2:54 pm
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Such beautiful and promising lines… May your pen become more and more powerful day by day…keep inspiring us in all ways…


Qutub
January 10, 2021 at 8:32 pm
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Very beautiful and has coherence. May you be blessed with more such expression to spread love and wisdom!


Ravi Nitesh
January 13, 2021 at 9:31 pm
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Beautiful poem
Beautifully written


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